10.15.2007

55 word Story V2.0

Adrianna was there when David walked in the door.
"Where's the extra house key?"
She was irritated. He shrugged, listless.
"I dunno."
"You probably left them at her house!"
She hissed.
"What?! Who's 'her'?"
"Screw you! You're cheating on me!"
Adrianna swung her purse at him. The key fell out and clattered to the floor.

2 comments:

robyn said...

hey you gave them names!!! and personalities! woot! go you!

EMiLEE said...

YEA i LIKE HOW U GAVE THEM NAMES..IT HELPS UNDERSTAND WHO'S WHO. AND i LiKE THE STORY...iTS G00D STUFF